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I'll Keep You Secret, If You Keep Mine {16+}

Post by Cheryl. on Wed Nov 19, 2008 12:15 pm



Pairing: Harry/Jennie, Harry/Robyn, Danny/Cheryl, Emma/Tom, Katy/Dougie
Summary: Harry meets this girl and is instantly drawn to her, he is soon shocked to find out that she is the new teacher at school and when his sister finds out she agrees to keep it a secret if he keeps hers!
Disclaimer: I dont own mcfly but i do own this story.
Author’s notes: Hope you enjoy.


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Re: I'll Keep You Secret, If You Keep Mine {16+}

Post by Cheryl. on Wed Nov 19, 2008 12:16 pm

Prologue

Have you ever done something that is wrong on so many levels but you can’t resist doing it? But what happens when you find out someone you love has a massive secret, that could ruin their life without the help of others and they reveal to you that they know your secret and tell you if you tell anyone about their secret they will spill your secret too. Do you spill the secret of your loved one to help them and ruin your life and the life of someone involved in your secret? That’s the situation if found myself in, what should I do?

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Post by Cheryl. on Wed Nov 19, 2008 12:17 pm

Chapter 1 - Harry’s POV

“I don’t think this is a great idea guys” Tom moans as we walk down the street, “Why not” Danny asks, “Because we are underage” Tom answers. “It’ll be fine, stop worrying, me and Danny have been before” I answer. Tom pouts and continues walking. We soon make our way to the bar. I head to the bar as the guys all take a seat at the back, “Four pints please?” I smile to the pretty barmaid, her hazel eyes sparking as she smiles, “Sure” she answers, “That’ll be six pounds please” she smiles as I hand her the cash, “Harry, by the way” I say as she hands me my changed, “Your point?” she giggles, “I was hoping that because you know my name you’d tell me yours” I answer confidently, “Vicki” she smiles “Nice to meet you”. “Yeah, you too” I smile and pick up the drinks and head over to the table. “Chatting up the barmaid Judd, What would Jennie think” Dougie teases as sit down, “Shut it” I snap, “It was nothing like that, was just been friendly”. “Yeah friendly alright” Danny winks. “Right just leave it will you” I snap again. We spend the rest of the night drinking and chatting away. As we are leaving I realize that I need to go to the toilet, “I’ll catch you guys up” I say as they stagger out of the bar. As I go to leave I met Vicki again, “Leaving so soon?” she smiles making me go weak at the knees. “Why do you want me to leave” I ask hoping she says no, “Not if you don’t want to” she smiles seductively. We sit in the bar for another hour talking away, “Can I walk you home” I ask as we head out into the dark street, “Sure” she smiles, when we eventually arrive at hers we share an amazing kiss before swapping mobile numbers. As I make my way home with thoughts of guilt fills my body, thinking about Vicki and how I’ve just cheated on my girlfriend. The guilt doesn’t last long, as I text Vicki, arranging to meet up with her tomorrow. Happy when she answers saying she’d love to, I continue on my way home.

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Re: I'll Keep You Secret, If You Keep Mine {16+}

Post by Leggy McBab on Sun Nov 23, 2008 2:26 pm

Fab start.
Still lub this ficcle!
More soon?
*smiles sweetly*
JenzIii. [:

-BeEp-BeEp-BaYbIi-

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Re: I'll Keep You Secret, If You Keep Mine {16+}

Post by Cheryl. on Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:28 am

...dumD YAP over here... wrote:Fab start.
Still lub this ficcle!
More soon?
*smiles sweetly*
JenzIii. [:


hmm.. you stop that smiling!!
you aint even bothering to read Mad
heheehe
ILY

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Post by Cheryl. on Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:28 am

Chapter 2 - Harry's POV

Having spent yesterday with Vicki, I make my way into school on cloud nine. I catch up with guys out at the football pitch. "Hey" I chirp happily at them. "Where you get to on Saturday, we wait for ages on you" Tom asks suspiciously, "Queue in the toilet" I lie, Tom remaining unconvinced, "You hooked up with that chick, didn't you?" Danny smirks, I roll my eyes, "Yeah alright, just shut up about it" I snap, hoping Jennie doesn't hear, as she walks over to us. Tom tuts and walks of taking Emma with him. "What's up with him" Jennie asks as she pecks my lips, I shrug, "Don't know, babe, you know what he's like" I lie. We spend time laughing and chatting between ourselves before its time to go to class, "I can't wait til the holidays" Danny says as we make our way. "Yeah me too, are we all still going to your parent's cabin Danny" Cheryl asks him and he nods, "Sure are, you in a bikini, can't wait" Danny gushes, "Oi that's my sister your perving over" I laugh as I playfully punch him. "Yeah, but she's my girlfriend" Danny protests hitting me back.

The rest of the day goes by really slowly, making it really boring. The only good thing that happened was texting Vicki. Tom is still in a huff with me but I don't see what his problem is, it's my life, I can do what I want and if I want to cheat on my girlfriend then that's up to me.

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Post by Cheryl. on Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:29 am

Chapter 3 - Cheryl's POV

I never want the summer holidays to come. I mean yeah it'll be great not having to go to school. But I really don't want to go to the cabin. Not after what Danny said, I was looking forward to it until he said that. I don't want to wear a bikini, not the way I look. Maybe if I forget to take it? No that won't work, the other girls will have spares. God why do we need to go to the stupid cabin anyway? Going will just make me feel worse about myself, watching Jennie, Emma and Katy in the bikini's looking hot, why can't I look like that I wonder.

I eventually make my way to Danny's, knocking on the door lightly. "Hey babe, come on in" he smiles brightly at me, I return the smile, "No one home" I ask nervously. "Nope, just us" he grins. I groan inwardly, not wanting to be in this situation. Putting my fears to the back of my mind, I follow Danny up to his room and I noticed he has tidied up. "See you cleaned" I giggle as I sit on the end of the bed, "Yeah, just for you" he smiles as he pushes me slightly making me lie down on the bed. When I'm lying down he straddles me and we begin kissing, slowly at first. Things soon speed up faster than I want. All too soon Danny's school shirt is discarded on the newly cleaned carpet, my hoodie following it soon after. "Danny" I say, as he attacks my neck with small kisses, he doesn't stop. "Danny" I say a little louder this time making him stop. "What's wrong babe?" he asks, I push him up slightly as I sit up, "I can’t do this" I sigh, "Why what's wrong" he asks, "It's just too soon" I explain, "Too soon, we've been going out for six months" he snaps at me. "Danny, don't get angry" I cry. He doesn't speak just lifts his shirt putting it back on and storming down stairs, I grab my hoodie and follow him. "Danny, please" I cry. "just go home" he snaps, "But Danny, why can’t you understand" I asks, "I just don't get it, is it me, don't you like me anymore or something" he asks, "Of course not, I just need some more time" I lie, truth is I just don't want him to see me naked. He nods, "I'm sorry babe" he says pulling me into a hug making me feel safe. "Why don't we watch some telly" he suggests as he wipes my tears from my cheeks. "Yeah" I say. We snuggle up watching some film, me eventually falling asleep in Danny's arms.

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Post by dannys~angel~in~disguise on Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:00 pm

awwww that last bit was so sweet, loveing this fic can't wait to read more.

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Re: I'll Keep You Secret, If You Keep Mine {16+}

Post by Cheryl. on Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:39 pm

dannys~angel~in~disguise wrote:awwww that last bit was so sweet, loveing this fic can't wait to read more.


more now xxxxx

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Post by Cheryl. on Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:39 pm

Chapter 4 - Tom's POV

"What's up with you and Harry?" Emma asks me pulling me from my daydream, "Nothing why?" I lie to her, I hate lying to her, I wish Harry would understand that, he might not love his girlfriend but I love her, that's why am so mad at him. "Don't lie to me Thomas" she says, I can tell she is annoyed, "you haven't spoke to him all day." I sigh heavily, "It nothing honestly babe, just something stupid" I lie again. Emma rolls her eyes at me I know she doesn't believe me. "I know it's not nothing Tom and I can't believe you won't tell me, we aren't meant to haves secrets" she shouts at me. "Babe I promise, it's nothing to do with me, it's Harry, he just stupid that's all" I say trying to get her to drop it, I really don't want to tell her, she only tell Jennie as they are best friends. "What's he done know" she sighs, "Was just drunk on Saturday and did something stupid, that's all" I say. "It must have been really stupid if you won't even talk to him" she says. "Yeah it was" I say hoping that'll be enough to stop her asking questions, "Tom, I can tell when you're lying, and at this moment you are lying to me" she says with a sweet smile on her face, "Okay, just leave it now, its Harry's problem not mine, or yours for that matter. I want to spend some time with my girlfriend, not spend most of my time covering for Harry" I snap. "Why would you need to cover for him?" she asks, great I think to myself, why couldn't she just leave it, what do I say know, come on Tom think of something. "Alright, he was just flirting with some girl when we were out" I say, at least it’s the truth. "Is that it, he didn't cheat on Jennie did he?" she asks and I shake my head, "Why didn't you just tell me?" she asks. "Please don't tell Jennie, that's what me and Harry were arguing about, he told me not to tell you because you'd only tell Jennie and he didn't want to argue with her over nothing" I lie. "Okay, but you shouldn't have lied to me Tom" she says and I nod in agreement with her. "I love you babe" I say to her. “I love you too" she says back.



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Post by Cheryl. on Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:40 pm

Chapter 5 - Danny’s POV

“Tom, you have to come” I whine at him, “No, I don’t want to ruin everyone’s holiday by going” Tom sulks, “you’ll ruin if you don’t go” I try to convince him. “No I’ll ruin it by going, since me and Harry aren’t talking” he says. “Aww come on, it won’t be the same without you. What about Emma?” I ask. “What about her” he asks. “How do you think she’ll feel” I smirk, this will make him go. “I dunno, not spoke to her about it” he sighs, “Well don’t and just come, you and Harry don’t have to talk to one another” I smile. “Okay then, just for Emma” he sighs again. “Great, now go and get packed, we leave tomorrow. Nine o’clock” I smile. “Okay, see you then” he says as he leaves.

The next morning we all meet at Harry’s. “Hey babe” I say greeting Cheryl. She smiles and lets me in. She heads upstairs and I go to the kitchen and talk to Harry. “Is he coming?” he asks, “Said he was last night” I shrug. “I don’t get him, it not like anyone is going to get hurt” Harry sighs. I don’t answer him, if he believes that then he’s mad. “Hey guys” Kay says as she enters, Dougie behind her. “Hi” me and Harry say at the same time. “Just waiting on Jennie, Tom and Emma” Harry tells Dougie and Katy. “Cool” Dougie says standing behind Katy, his hands placed on her stomach. Cheryl comes in and she stands in front of me like Katy is with Dougie and I wrap my arms around her. We all stand chatting waiting on the others. The door bell goes and we all head out, pack the cars up and head off.

We reach the cabin and I grab Cheryl’s hand a show her to the master bedroom, “This is our room” I say as I slowly push the door open. She smiles slightly and I watch her look around the room. “I’ll go get our stuff, you stay here” I say and head back down to the car. I grab our things and make my way back in, “Oi” Harry shouts on me, “Yeah, mate?” I ask, “No funny business with my little sis” he says. I laugh and walk away from him, “I mean it” he shouts after me. I head into the room and Cheryl is sat on the bed. I go and sit with her. “This is going to be great” I say as I kiss her. “Why?” she asks. Confused I tell her why, “Well you’re here” I answer. “It’s not happening Danny” she shouts and leaves the room. I sit stunned at her outburst, she’s been doing that a lot lately.


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Post by Cheryl. on Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:48 pm

Chapter 6 - Iris’s POV

Having run off from Danny, I head off finding a little quite place near the lake. I sit my thoughts taking over my mind. Tears form I my eyes, eventually falling freely down my cheeks. I sit on my own for w while until I’m disturbed from my thoughts when Dougie sits down beside me. “You okay?” he asks, noticing the tears. I don’t answer, just nod my head. “You don’t look it?” he says and we both laugh. “Danny is worried about you” Dougie states once we both stop laughing. “Yeah sure he is” Cheryl answers. “Why would you say that” he asks. I ignore him. “Come one Cheryl, he does” Dougie smiles. “He just wants to get me into bed” I state. “No he doesn’t, he loves you” Dougie says putting his arm around her. “Yeah right” I smile up to Dougie. “Come on” Dougie says after a short silence. “No, I want to stay here, I’m not ready to see him” I sigh. “Well you don’t have to see him, you can sleep in with Katy and I’ll sleep in with Dan, ok?” Dougie convinces me. I nod and we both head back. Me heading straight to Dougie and Katy’s room. I tell Katy about what had happened, her telling me the same as Dougie. I sigh and get into bed, falling into a restless sleep soon after.




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Post by ♥Mrs_Wanna_Be_Judd♥ on Fri Dec 05, 2008 4:58 am

Loving it hun More when you can...its robyn btw

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Post by Cheryl. on Fri Dec 05, 2008 11:55 am

mcfly_girl_wannabe wrote:Loving it hun More when you can...its robyn btw


Thanks.
More now, finally the writer block for this fic lifted!!!!!!!
Glad you joined up Very Happy

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Post by Cheryl. on Fri Dec 05, 2008 11:55 am

Chapter 7 – Cheryl’s POV

I wake up early next morning and get dressed and head back out to the little quiet place I found last night. I sit for hours thinking about me and Danny before finally deciding what I am going to do. Just as I am about to go back I am startled to find Harry behind me.
“Alright Sis” he smiles as he sits down beside me. I smiled weakly at him before focusing my attention back to the rippling water of the lake. “Why are you here, and what’s up with you and Danny” Harry asks me after a short silence.
“I wanted to think, and nothing is up with me and Danny” I sigh, knowing he’ll never believe me.
“Cheryl I know there is something up, you wouldn’t have spent the night in Katy and Dougie’s room” He said as he looked at me.
“Just leave it will you” I snap at him.
“No I wont, I knew this would happen, I knew I shouldn’t have agreed to you both going out with one another, now I am stuck in the middle, just sort it out will you” Harry shouted as he began to walk away. I began sobbing and before I know it Harry is back and he has his arm wrapped round me.
“I’m sorry Harry” I sob
“Hey don’t be, I shouldn’t have shouted at you like that” Harry comforted me
“I…I…just…don’t…know…what…to…do” I stuttered, the tears stopping me from speaking properly.
“What about” Harry asked
“Danny, he” I begin, “He wants to sleep with me” I sob
“Right, and that’s a problem why? Well apart from the fact that you are my little sister and its not really the kind of thing I want to know” Harry said, laughing slightly. I laugh a little too.
“I don’t think I am ready, and I don’t get why he even likes me” I say
“Well he’ll just have to wait if your not ready wont he” Harry smiled, “And what’s not to like”
“Look at me I am fat and ugly, I look a mess” I say as a single tear rolls down my cheek
“Don’t be mad, you are not fat or ugly” Harry smiled. I look at him, of course he was going to say that he was my big brother. “Come on its cold out here and I think it is going to rain, I’ll talk to Danny for you” he suggested. I nodded and we headed back to the cabin.

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